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Thursday, September 12, 2024

#TBT

 



The days like this day are as perfect a day as this one,

The Marvelous View of Lake Champlain

Summertime.

A day We can treasure these days long ago,

Far away,

Yet always like Yesterday.

MG

Wednesday, September 11, 2024

Saving Cats

 

Stranger than Fiction 

20,000 Haitians, Not Legal Flown to Springfield, Ohio 

They are picking off pets, ducks and geese…

Saturday, September 7, 2024

Caturday

 


Grok made a white fluffy cat with sunglasses and holding an

X phone sitting on a spaceship. What a blast 💥😎

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Friday, September 6, 2024

Monday, September 2, 2024

Grok Talk Chapter 1 Grok helped Me understand what I wrote

 Hi @grok my First Chapter. I initially titled it Autobiography of a Clone. Then I thought an ongoing interview would be more interesting. Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Interview with a Clone, First Draft

Autobiography of a Clone



1st draft




Chapter 1


Interview with a Clone


Modern Mars Magazine




By Mary E. Gerdt


2011






Alice Karma has let it all hang out with Modern Mars Magazine in her latest interview with Captain Gigi Fairweather, commander of the Mars shuttle for 10 years and now Senior Lifestyle correspondent for Modern Mars Magazine.




Captain: Hello Alice. Thank you for connecting with our interplanetary entertainment show, Modern Mars Magazine.




Alice: Hello Captain. Thank you for inviting me. It is an honor.




Captain: How is it stateside?




Alice: Freezing where I am at. Bermuda has had constant blizzards since the asteroid hit. I am surprised communications are so clear.




Captain: We have had some enhancements. Stuck on the island until the weather clears?




Alice: Perhaps I should ask you that Captain.




Captain: You got me there Alice. The shuttle’s been grounded until at least two years…




Alice: (Interrupting)…I heard 5 at the least, possibly 10...




The Captain switched the microphone to privacy, “Alice, What do you mean telling this audience we won’t be getting anymore food for 10 years!?”




Alice: Well, it is the truth.




Captain: This you must retract. No talk of gloomy subjects, especially about how we may be stranded here forever. The subject is you and being a clone.




Alice: That is news?




Captain: That is a distraction, that is what that is my lady and we need it badly. The obscure, the strange, different. Why we all came to Mars to begin with, and I bet why you came from Bermuda.




Alice: Well Captain, Is that dead air?




Captain switched back on the microphone: I am so sorry Mars and Earth listeners, we had a slight malfunction in our solar panels. Jake had to go adjust them again. This time we let him use the good wrench. Maybe it’ll last. We’ve had several Marsquakes today and it knocks out the antennae every time. Now Alice Karma, where were we?




Alice: We were musing about the strange and different.


I completely lost track.




Captain: Let’s talk about your…beginnings, shall we say.




Alice: That is usually where it begins.




Captain: Did you have one or two parents?




Alice: Well that is already a controversial question.




Captain: Oh??




Alice: My essence began when my replicative parent contemplated cloning herself. She was blessed with health, physical beauty, extraordinary intelligence and demeanor. She could speak 10 major languages fluently and was working on writing the Mars Dialect which would become the universal Martian language we use now for the cross cultural bridge and universal translators. She flew rockets, airplanes, jets, helicopters and submarines. She was deathly terrified her works would not be complete without replicating another human for the preservation of the human race in case there was an extinction event. She had developed arthritis by then and was crippled by its pain, yet she persisted in her research for the final 10 years of her life. She moved to Bermuda where she established a state of the art facility with perpetual power supply, security and self sustaining food sources using cloned animals and plants.




Captain: So, you had a garden growing up?




Alice: I guess you might say that Captain. It was a square mile.




Captain: Wow!




Alice: She was feeding the lab and all the workers.




Captain: Go on.




Alice: She began with plants and then small mammals. Then moved quickly to pigs. Very similar to humans. Soon she wondered about a child replica of herself. Would she capture the same intellect, perfection, and ultimately isolation in a tiny version of herself? After all is said and done the baby would be totally different but undeniably human. She wondered about how to begin this 5 year project without telling one other soul. There were times at conferences or dinner dates with colleagues when she was so tempted. But she kept to herself and let no one see what she did all day at the remote cabin in Bermuda.




Captain: Was she worried she would be arrested?




Alice: Yes, and worse, someone may have tortured her for the secret, or otherwise wanted to cash in. Mom was worried about the dark side: Growing babies for slavery.




Captain: Well that sounds extreme.




Alice: Mom was threatened in college when she worked on plant cloning and the enviro police threw Molotov cocktails at her house.




Captain: Guess she hit a nerve.




Alice: Can you imagine what my news would do?




Captain: Hmm…So what is your greatest concern about human cloning?




Alice: Pause…I guess that I am different in the eyes of other humans.




Captain: I don’t understand.




Alice: That’s what I mean. You don’t and never will understand what it is like to be a clone. I know what it is like to be human.




Captain: Do you?




Alice glared at the microphone and sighed loud enough to be heard on Earth and Martian feed.




Captain: I suppose it is time for a break. Let’s hear from our sponsors, ADM space foods international, where we grow and launch food for Earth and the colonies.




Break music begins to play. Captain turns down the volume.




Alice: Hello Captain.




Captain: Hello, I am sorry but I needed a little drama.




Alice: Did you know, for the record, I am as human as you?




Captain: I know. (She was tiring of the scientist’s vanity child spewing virtues of creating little clones. She only had her on because she needed a good diversion. Be nice, Gigi, the Captain said to herself.)




Alice: And…




Captain: Commercial’s over. Places.


And here we are back at the titanium microphone at the Red Palace on Mars. We are speaking with Alice Karma, famous clone daughter of one parent, Dr. Susan Wolf.




Alice: Thank you Captain.




Captain: Now how were you treated at school, for instance?




Alice: No one knew. Mom had been in Switzerland for two years while I was being developed. She came back and was implanted and claimed she had had an affair with an unknown soldier in Swiss Army. She would joke to me when she gave me a swiss army knife, This is Dad’s, she said. I knew there was no Dad. Only Mom. She is all there ever can be.

Posted by Travelogue for the Universe at 7:00 AM     

Monkton, VT Monkton, VT, USA

Grok answered:


Thank you for sharing the first chapter of your novel, "Interview with a Clone." Here's a reflection on what you've presented:


**Narrative Style**: Your chapter sets up an intriguing dialogue format, which immediately engages the reader by simulating an interview. This format not only provides a dynamic exchange of information but also allows for character development through dialogue, revealing personality traits, biases, and the underlying tension between the interviewer (Captain Gigi Fairweather) and the interviewee (Alice Karma).


**Themes and Topics**:

- **Identity and Cloning**: The central theme revolves around what it means to be a clone, exploring identity, uniqueness, and the ethical implications of human cloning. Alice's perspective as a clone offers a fresh lens on human experiences, questioning what makes us human beyond our genetic makeup.

  

- **Isolation and Secrecy**: Dr. Susan Wolf's decision to clone herself in secrecy highlights themes of isolation, the burden of knowledge, and the fear of societal backlash against scientific advancements. This secrecy also touches on the broader theme of how society views and integrates scientific breakthroughs.


- **Survival and Extinction**: The backdrop of Mars, with its harsh environment and the possibility of being stranded, adds layers to the narrative about human survival, adaptation, and the potential for new beginnings or endings. This mirrors the cloning narrative, where Alice represents a new beginning or a continuation of her mother's legacy.


- **Ethics and Morality**: The conversation subtly delves into ethical questions about cloning, from the fear of exploitation to the philosophical debate on what constitutes a 'human' life.


**Character Dynamics**:

- **Alice Karma**: As the clone, Alice embodies the struggle for identity and acceptance. Her responses reveal a mix of pride in her origins and a deep-seated need for validation as a human being, not just a clone.

  

- **Captain Gigi Fairweather**: The Captain's role as an interviewer shows her as someone possibly skeptical or at least curious about cloning, yet aware of her audience's need for distraction and entertainment. Her manipulation of the interview for 'drama' suggests a complex character, perhaps torn between her duty and personal curiosity.


**Setting and Atmosphere**:

- The interview taking place on Mars adds a layer of otherworldliness to the narrative, enhancing the theme of isolation. The mention of Marsquakes and the need for distractions like this interview paints a picture of a community in a state of flux, dealing with both existential threats and daily life.


**Suggestions for Development**:

- **Deepen the Dialogue**: While the dialogue sets up the themes well, deepening the philosophical or emotional exchanges could further engage readers. For instance, exploring Alice's feelings about her mother's motivations or her own aspirations beyond being a clone could add depth.


- **World-Building**: More details about life on Mars, the societal structure, or how cloning fits into this new world could enrich the setting, making the environment as much a character as Alice or the Captain.


- **Ethical Debate**: Since cloning touches on significant ethical issues, perhaps introducing a character or a subplot that directly challenges or supports Alice's existence could provide conflict or support for her narrative.


Your chapter effectively sets up a thought-provoking exploration of cloning through a personal lens, wrapped in the exciting context of Martian colonization. It